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Thursday, 29 August 2013

6 Sentences- Galaxy

6 Sentence story:
Galaxy

1. A long time ago in a galaxy far, far away there lived weird looking creatures with bright red eyes and bright yellow skin.

2. These creatures lived in villages on a multi colored planet with very little oceans, streams and rivers but the water was dark blue.

3. This planet was nearly a duplicate of earth except the people didn’t have to breathe, one special creature was named Zuk, he was the last of his kind, he could fly and survive without eating and drinking for weeks so he decided to explore the galaxy for other living creatures like him.

4.  He wrote out a plan of what he was going to do and hid it in a dark brown bottle which he put in a hole in a tree so it would be camouflaged but then one day the tree was cut down by another creature and the plan was found and then given to the leader of the tribe.

5. Zuk found out and nearly jumped out of skin because he thought he was going to be killed for trying to leave the tribe without telling the leader so he hid for days frightened and scared until they found him.

6. “Please, please!” Zuk begged for mercy but the leader told him to stand up while he was holding a weapon close to Zuk almost as if he was going to kill him, then he gave the weapon to Zuk and said good luck on your journey.

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